Revised

For the second project I didn’t revise much. When I wrote my rough draft I made sure I wrote it to the best of my ability. I took some of the advices from the comments posted on the blog. Help from the audience is always useful when writing about something. Punctuation and grammar is always important in a paper. Also I made sure I had the five W’s. I read my paper several times to make sure that they were all there somewhere. I was happy to see that the people that read my article understood the theme. It is very important to me to get my point across to the reader. When the reader comprehends what I was trying to achieve with my paper that’s how I know that I wrote it well. I know I didn’t revise much at all, and maybe I’m being too positive about this second project but I just hope my point was understood by my audience. Another small thing that I revised was the titles of the articles that I cited from. I know it is very important to include where exactly your information was taken from. Though I did give the name of the authors, I forgot to include the titles and I’m very glad someone pointed that out in one of the comments. A writer can always use help from the reader.